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Rance wuz here...
Wednesday, 27 October 2004
Part 27 by feenxc
Anna quickly sidestepped, hoping her mother hadn't seen the police car pulling in.
"I need to stall" she thought.

"Mother, please, you've got to rethink this!" she blurted out.

Sara gave her a shove and said "No, little girl, you're the one who has some thinking to do. Now get moving."

"Mother, I just don't think I can take anymore of this. Do you have any idea what kind of hell the last two days have been for me? I pissed off this entire town when I bought the pin, even though I gave the rest of the junk to Lily. I have had an insane monkey-like man jump out at me. That was just the beginning."

Anna quickly glanced outside, wondering who was in the police car and what was taking so long.

"On top of that, someone left a gross message on my front door, then cleaned it up before anybody else could see it. Now people are starting to think I'm the crazy one!"
"I've been in a car crash, which I am sure gave me a concussion because I had the strangest dream last night. After that, an 8 year old broke into my house, tried to steal the pin from me, and according to you, has been conning me from the get-go."

"Well I'm not sure she's been totally conning you. I am positive she has her own agenda, though." Sara interrupted.

"But I believed her" Anna wailed, "Mother, she's just a little girl."

Sara looked at her in disgust. "Pull yourself together, we've got to get going."

Anna was getting desperate. It couldn't be Kaelin in the car, he had been in surgery last she knew. Who was it? Where were they?

"Oh no, you're going to hear me out, Mother! Lily told me the most amazing story, which I thought was about my ancestors. But no, you had to ruin that, didn't you? This has been the worst day ever! I fell down my steps, hit my head, when I came to, I thought Lily had been kidnapped. On the way to look for her, I got hauled off to a murder scene by someone I thought was becoming more than just a friend. He had even brought the files on the old case for me to read."

"Please let someone come soon, I don't know how long she'll listen to me whine" thought Anna.

"I know, I read the same files" Sara interrupted again. But Anna was on a roll, not truly listening to what Sara had said.

"The absolute worst, was witnessing Deputy Kaelin being shot. I still have his blood on my clothes. And who do I find lurking around? You, of all people! Only we don't get a chance to even talk, the electricity goes out and I get kidnapped. As if enough hasn't already happened to me!"

Anna was beyond desperate. There had been more than enough time for the cop to show up. And knowing her mother's lack of patience, Anna knew she was running out of time. The only thing she had left was to keep talking.

"Mother, the strangest man took me. He claims that he is a paid killer, working for John, trying to find the true heir to John's fortunes. Only John turns out to be as looney as those two monkey-like men who now I'm told might be my brothers."

Sara laughed "Yes, he is, isn't he".

By this time Anna was getting pissed. "Mom, he told me that you are not Sara, you are not the heir, and he implied that you killed my dad...Mother you need to start telling me the truth. Are you Sara? Did you kill my father? Mother, please..." Anna was beginning to choke up, overflowing with anger and sorrow.

Sara was still laughing "You really think you can handle the truth? Well, let's start with a little question of my own..."Why do you keep calling me that?"

Anna looked confused "Calling you what?"

"Mother..."


to be continued...and ended

Posted by captainhoof at 10:58 AM CDT
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Wednesday, 27 October 2004 - 11:26 AM CDT

Name: WendyJo

Hot hot hot!!! And excellent summing up of past entries, by the way...everyone has put such a great twist in their entry..
So Rocker is the last one up? Poor Rocker! But I can't wait to read it!!

Wednesday, 27 October 2004 - 4:21 PM CDT

Name: feenxc

thank you wendyjo, i've been gnawing at my fingernails, hoping i did ok.

two things:

1.we should all stand up and give rdd a big round of applause as soon as rocker's entry is posted. she went above and beyond, and probably won't even get a coffee machine for all her hard work.

2.(very plaintively) what's next?

kisshugs

nastrovia

Wednesday, 27 October 2004 - 5:19 PM CDT

Name: Deanna
Home Page: http://deannaj6.tripod.com/journal

OMG, I am speechless. That was great! You did a great job summing everything up, and I don't know if you did it cause I asked for someone to, but thanks! I understand so much better now. I think you were the one that summed everything up before, right? It really makes the story come together when you understand everything that is going on. I don't want it to end, but I am sure the last person will do a great job!

Wednesday, 27 October 2004 - 6:30 PM CDT

Name: Rubber Duckie

Really, no applause necessary. If anyone deserves a hand it is all of the participants. And again, you did a great job summizing everything here feenxc.

What's next? Well, wait and see...I think it will be interesting.

Wednesday, 27 October 2004 - 7:44 PM CDT

Name: WendyJo

Yes RDD, ***WONDERFUL JOB***!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2. What's next???

I MISS RANCE- my poochie-pooo!! My snugg-ums!! My sweetie-pie!! My favorite psuedononymous internet bloggin' celebrity!! I am having withdrawal symptoms--my hands are shaking--it has been months--oh how oh how can I go on?? Dearest A.S.Staffers, please throw me a bone, or pretend to throw one, (in your typical witty and sarcastic manner)--I am a former girlfriend of Rance's and I am tired of doing drive-by's on the street at his address with no psuedo sleb hotties in sight-- I get drunk off of cheap beer late at night and make hang-up phone calls to his number, just to hear his voice saying, "Hello? hello? Who's there? Geez, Wendy, is that you AGAIN??" *click*-- I flip through the pages of my latest issues of National Enquirer and Weekly World News looking for photos of Rance, but he is nowhere to be found--

*sigh* there is always Bat-Boy, the 50lb Baby, and Ben Affleck..

Is there even a Rance anymore?
*sobbing in corner, clutching her keyboard and mouse*

Wednesday, 27 October 2004 - 8:49 PM CDT

Name: feenxc

thanks bunches, and yes, you were one of the ones who gave me the idea. i'm glad it worked.

kisshugs!

nastrovia

Thursday, 28 October 2004 - 8:52 AM CDT

Name: nef5

OMG i got goosebumps when i read the last 3 lines, WTG, looking forward to seeing how it all ends

Thursday, 28 October 2004 - 2:34 PM CDT

Name: flyrchld
Home Page: http://www.flyrchld@mindsay.com

feenxc,

I have been staying away from the blog so that I can have a lot to read all at once. There have been some great entries and there have been some not so great and altogether confusing, but you take the cake! That was fabulous!

Has anyone asked before? Do you have a blog? Please, please keep writing and give me something new to read...

Thanks,

fly

Thursday, 28 October 2004 - 5:26 PM CDT

Name: feenxc

fly, coming from you, that is great praise. i'm so glad you liked it. i am sorry tho, at this point i don't have a blog. i've thought about it, but right at this moment i have a responsibility to my daughter and her kids. my kid is in night school and i watch her girls. right now they are behind me, yelling at each other over something silly, and it has taken me 10 minutes just to get this far. she will be done with school soon (thank you), then i'll think about it again. will let you know.

kisshugs

nastrovia

Thursday, 28 October 2004 - 5:28 PM CDT

Name: feenxc

nef5, goosebumps? really? that just made my day!

kisshugs

nastrovia

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