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Rance wuz here...
Wednesday, 13 October 2004
PTI Part 19 by MsLauren
Anna watched them load the gurney into the back of the
ambulance, her mind racing from everything she'd been
through since the auction.

"What if..." Anna said out loud to herself, looking back
at the file and the pictures again.

She looked at the photos, doing her best to clear her
mind of everything but what she'd been told about
Clyde, Rose and Sara. What if the dead man in the
photos was John and not Clyde? What if Clyde had
killed Rose and John and staged it all to look like a,
his, murder-suicide and then had taken off with Sara?
Anna's mother had always been very vague about her
past. Anna knew next to nothing about her mother's
family. She'd never met her grandfather on her
mother's side of the family, and most definitely not
her grandmother on that side of the family.

Anna allowed these thoughts to fester in her mind as
she watched the deputy walk from the Inn back toward
the car. It didn't explain everything, but it would
certainly explain a few very important details. Anna
also found herself wondering....what if Sara wasn't
Clyde's child either? What if Sara was also the
product of Rose and John's elicit affair? What if
Clyde knew what was going on all along? What if....

Anna's reverie was broken by the snap of the deputy's
fingers in front of her face.

"Hey, you okay? You with me?" the deputy asked,
concerned that Anna's head wound was more serious than
he'd initially thought.

"I'm...I'm better," Anna replied, surprised to find she
actually meant it.

"Would you mind terribly coming with me to the
hospital to talk to the coroner? I'd rather not leave
you alone again, given everything that's happened,
and, well...your head looks like it needs to be attended
to."

"That'd be fine," Anna answered, realizing that
although she was starting to feel better she was still
suffering from a nasty headache, "But I'm starving, so
we need to stop off at the nearest convenient store
for me to get some snacks so I don't pass out from low
blood sugar."

"Sure thing," Deputy Kaelin replied as he started up
the car.

"You know, this is all Aaron Boone's fault," Anna
said, laughing.

"I'm sorry, who?"

"You don't follow baseball, do you?"

"No, I'm sorry, I don't."

"My divorce. The straw that broke the camel's back
between me and my husband, Ben, was game 7 of last
year's American League Championship Series."

"You got divorced over baseball?"

"No, we got divorced for many other reasons, but when
I had to throw him out of the house over his temper
tantrum when the Red Sox lost to the Yankees yet
again, I knew it was time. I guess that's what I get
for marrying an irrational Red Sox fan."

"And now you're knee deep in a murder mystery," Deputy
Kaelin said, pulling into the parking lot of the local
Seven Eleven.

"And now I'm finding out that sometimes life can turn
out like an episode of `Twin Peaks.'"

Posted by captainhoof at 3:29 PM CDT
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Wednesday, 13 October 2004 - 3:41 PM CDT

Name: NativeGirl

As I suspected, simply a typo. Thanks for the clarification. At the risk of offending any Texans reading this blog - go Cards!

Wednesday, 13 October 2004 - 4:12 PM CDT

Name: NativeGirl

Just a thought, did you consider Rancetal? Given your apparent proficiency in latin, something tells me you did. I like Rancetera. The difference between the two is subtle but significant ? quite an honor to bestow upon your guest bloggists.

Regards,
NG

Wednesday, 13 October 2004 - 5:48 PM CDT

Name: feenxc

they do say to write about what you know, ms lauren, and you did a great job. pity i'm baseball ignorant. have you ever heard carlin's version of a baseball game? don't remember all of it, but the part about the pitcher being in a pit instead of on the mound tickled my funny bone.

oh well, etc., etc., etc...

kisshugs!

nastrovia

Wednesday, 13 October 2004 - 9:36 PM CDT

Name: Curious Girl

Whew! good thing I didn't follow you 'cause I don't know nothin' about baseball. Good job - I think specific details like that give Anna's character some more dimension.

CG

Thursday, 14 October 2004 - 10:54 AM CDT

Name: Deanna
Home Page: http://deannaj6.tripod.com/journal

I thought that was very good MsLauren. It seems like this story is somewhat coming together.

Great Job!!

Thursday, 14 October 2004 - 11:07 AM CDT

Name: Ms Lauren lurves her Yankees

what can I say? when the Sox and Yanks are playing, I have to get my Affleck digs in wherever, whenever, and, well, *blush* I couldn't help myself here (not that I don't have much love for the man - the more shit I give someone, the more I love them, just ask my sister and some of my very best friends who get my abuse on a daily basis ;)....plus, I honestly didn't know what to write otherwise. at least my part is just a small cog in a much larger, much more well-written whole.

Thursday, 14 October 2004 - 1:26 PM CDT

Name: Bubba

Sports bore me, so I can't grab that one by the horns, but since I remember Rance being a Sox fan I think he might get a little vinegrette-ish today. Good job, you pulled together a piece of the mystery and gave us all a direction, we are now not standing at Frost's forked road anymore. Or, at least not for a while. And, we know a little bit more about Anna...damn, another character though, Ben- the bitter baseball loving ex.

I guess I can't say that sports bore me entirely since I still have a few Michael Jordan Wheaties posters from my youth tucked away somewhere. The one's where he's looking at the camera like he could kill someone, like a badass, not like he could be in a movie with Bugs Bunny...

-Bubba

Thursday, 14 October 2004 - 2:52 PM CDT

Name: Ms Lauren has lost her mind

sorry, that should've read "the more I love someone, the more shit I give them." I'm too tired from staying up until David Ortiz scares me by making me think he's going to hit the game winning home run for the Sox at which point I turn off the TV and go to sleep. oh how I can't wait until baseball season is over, at which point everything I say will be about Duke men's basketball. hee. but at this point I'll take tonite being a travel day, which means I can go to bed at 9 instead of 11:30. no, will not stay up to watch the Cards.....will not be swayed by that which is Albert Pujols.... oy....

anyway, glad y'all liked my part of PTI otherwise.

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