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Rance wuz here...
Tuesday, 21 September 2004
Part 5 by JCanuck
A feeling that quickly turned from mere intellectual curiosity into something more urgent as she pulled up to her new home and stepped out of her car. Anna looked in disbelief at the grisly sight waiting on her doorstep. A circle of carefully placed tiny bones and in the center, what appeared to be a blood-soaked pile of feathers. Anna's eyes followed the smear of blood leading up her door to a grainy black and white blowup of the very treasure safely nestled in her pocket. On the door above it written in paintbrush strokes of blood were the words "Memento mori".

Careful not to touch anything, Anna looked more closely at the photo. Yes, it was her treasure. Yet in the photo, the pin, her pin, appeared to be embedded in the flesh of whoever it was in the picture. She could feel the hair on the back of her neck start to rise, her anger too. She turned on her heel and jumped into her car, determined to find Deputy Kaelin.

Driving down Main Street, she spotted the police car parked in front of the donut shop and the Deputy and Buzz in the midst of loudly wrestling a screeching crazed monkey out of the bar next door. She parked her car next to the police cruiser and waited until they had managed to get Stan under control, something which seemed to consist of waving a bottle of V.O. under his nose and humming Bob Dylan tunes. Stan seemed to be mesmerized by the rye whisky and lost somewhere in his thoughts with the Dylan songs and soon started rocking himself and keening to the music.

"Deputy Kaelin", Anna called. "I need to talk to you, and I don't think this can wait until this evening". "What's up?" he replied with a grin. "Not that I mind seeing you earlier, you're a breath of fresh air in this town". His grin faded as Anna quickly described what she had found on her doorstep. He opened the door to his car and said "Get in, we're going out there to take a look, and I'll fill you in on the story on the way."

Eyes on the road, he started "As I mentioned earlier, both the husband and wife were found dead and the daughter Sara disappeared at the same time. The young man who was working for them was named Anthony and it was he who found the bodies of Rose and Clyde. It was a poorly kept secret at the time that he and Rose were having an affair, and that he had been begging Rose to run away with him back to New Orleans where he came from. "

"New Orleans?" Anne interrupted, "That's odd, that's where I come from, and visibly whoever left their message on my doorstep must have spent some time in those parts too."

"After hearing your description, that thought occurred to me too" said the Deputy. "Anthony was brought in for questioning, but the police didn't have enough evidence to charge him with anything. He was released and shortly thereafter disappeared, leaving behind everything he owned. The police went through his belongings and found the receipt for the pin that you bought today. On the same receipt was another item, a sister piece if you will. No trace of that was ever found."

(to be continued)


Posted by captainhoof at 5:01 AM CDT
Updated: Tuesday, 21 September 2004 11:26 AM CDT
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Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 11:43 AM CDT

Name: Rubber Duckie

Bravo Canuckie! I must say for DAYS I have been trying to find out what "memento mori" translated to. I knew memento, but the mori was a puzzle. I finally figured it out this morning! Love it!

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 11:45 AM CDT

Name: t_rexintex

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 12:20 PM CDT

Name: Nicole

Whoa JCanuck, you took this story to a whole new level...I loved your reference to Stan...speaking of Stan...where are you Bingo, I know your depressed and all but let us know your still breathing out there.

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 12:27 PM CDT

Name: Bubba

Ahh, this story gets better with age, like cheese, wine, and Viggo Mortensen.


T-Rex, it would be great to be rich, but impossible to be a rich old man, since I in fact, have no male bits or pieces. Thanks for the advice, someday I may use it, but for now I try to live a simple beatnik existence, without the sordid drinking, random sex with strangers, and drug use.

Peace and Love,
Bubba

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 1:34 PM CDT

Name: Sass
Home Page: http://sass104.tripod.com/sass/index.blog

The Rance Warlock Project.

Now that's just creepy canuck! That movie scared me to death! There's so much going on here. Good job! I am so glad I was one of the first. I would hate to be at the end of this line. And what happened to Dick? And why does Dylan have that effect on Stan? So many guestions..


L

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Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 4:13 PM CDT

Name: t_rexintex

Well there ya go. Forgive the sexist assumption. I'm from Texas, where Bubba, at least in my nape of the neck, has always been gender specific. I guess I didn't get the memo.

T Rex
P.S.
Don't wait for someday. You don't have to tell your beatnik friends that you're selling out to the reality of the inevitable.. Memento Abeo..

OK, off my soap box.

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 4:46 PM CDT

Name: Lora

JCanuck, you did a wonderful job. Following you next with the story will be hard to do.

Best wishes,
Lora

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 5:37 PM CDT

Name: Bubba

T-Rex: No problem, it's not usually used as a girl's name, which is why I used it as a blog name. I know I should be investing, saving, and all that- but I don't make much money doing what I do, and I'm not even sure what I really want to do yet. I'll put it on my to do list. Hell, I don't even have dental insurance.

Why does everyone speak Latin? I knew I shouldn't have tried to be different with my taking Portuguese in college.

RDD: strawberry cake is my fave too...mmmm, pink.


-Bubba


Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 5:50 PM CDT

Name: El

That's some tasty suspense!

Can't say "I couldn't put it down," but I certainly couln't minimize the window.

Loved it, JCanuck!

El

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 6:03 PM CDT

Name: Bingo The Monkey

If dogs run free, why not me
Across the swamp of time?
My mind weaves a symphony
And tapestry of rhyme.
Oh, winds which rush my tale to thee
So it may flow and be,
To each his own, it's all unknown,
If dogs run free.

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 8:40 PM CDT

Name: Lisa Marie

Hey Gang -

Love the story so far and it is progressing well.

(Rubs her hands together and hopes that her part will live up to the high standards set by those before her)

Hugs & Kisses
LM

Wednesday, 22 September 2004 - 9:48 AM CDT

Name: Karma Marie

Wow, just found this site today, what a clever idea. Great writing JCanuck and everyone! I'll definately be stopping in to see where the story goes next.

Wednesday, 22 September 2004 - 11:55 AM CDT

Name: Rubber Duckie

Bingo aka Stan...Are you sober???

Wednesday, 22 September 2004 - 3:37 PM CDT

Name: Pink Poppy
Home Page: http://tall-poppy-diaries.blogspot.com

Ooooo, I heard the "Twilight Zone" theme song swirling as I read your installment. And, of course, I loved the effortless reference to New Orleans--one of the South's best haunts. Great Job!

Friday, 1 October 2004 - 6:13 PM CDT

Name: Rocker
Home Page: http://rocker.blogs.com

Smart, JC. . .your subtlety doesn't go unnoticed. . .touching closer to home, aren't we. . .

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