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Rance wuz here...
Monday, 20 September 2004
Pardon the Interruption Part 4 by Nicole
Anna listened intently having so many questions swirling in her mind.

"What was so unusual?" she asked.

"Well, Rose and her husband Clyde had a daughter, Sara. It was said she was a beautiful girl, always under the watchful eyes of her father. But she always would find a way to venture out and cause a stir with her parents and the locals. After her parents were found dead, she was never found. It has always been a mystery." The deputy gave a slight shrug reaching for his coffee.

Puzzled, Anna asked, "What about the young man, was he involved with her disappearance?"

With a smirk the deputy answered, "It depends on who you ask."

About that time a voice came from the walkie talkie, "Deputy Kaelin.."

"Yes", he replied.

"Sir, well, Stan is gone sir."

"But Buzz, you were supposed to pick him up here at the auction house." the deputy said with a squint in his eyes.

"Well sir, I did but I stopped at the donut shoppe and, well, he must have...."

The deputy quickly inserted, "Listen, we will continue this conversation later, now go look for him."

"Yes sir, I'm on it."

Seemingly embarrassed, the deputy said, "As the saying goes, if you want a job done right...I would like to continue our conversation, say later this evening, there is a great little diner in town."

Anna felt slightly unprepared for this invitation, but she knew the story that she had just heard had just scratched the surface...I have so many questions she thought..who was the young man, what was his relationship with Rose, what about the pin and Sara?

Anna looked at the cup of coffee realizing she hadn't even took a drink, cleared her throat and said, "Sure."

"Good", he said with a smile. "It's Joe's diner, in the middle of town, you can't miss it. Meet you there, say, seven."

"Sure, I will see you then." she answered.

As they stood up saying their goodbyes, Anna noticed the locals staring, if not gawking at them. Feeling uncomfortable with the scrutiny she was looking forward to getting in her car and heading to her new found home.

Driving along the country road, Anna observed the breeze blowing through the orchard trees and children riding their bicycles on the newly cemented sidewalk. Peace and tranquility seemed to encompass her as she drove through this small town. But how she pondered...a murder/suicide, a mystery of a lost girl that was never solved. She was looking forward to learning more...

(to be continued...)

Posted by captainhoof at 12:06 PM CDT
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Monday, 20 September 2004 - 12:25 PM CDT

Name: Rubber Duckie

Excellent job Nicole!

Next up is Africanuck, then Mia Toretto, then Lora and then Mikeeee.

Monday, 20 September 2004 - 1:05 PM CDT

Name: Irena

This is unfair..

I'm hooked. I'm addicted.
Damn.

Well.. Just have to come back for more, time and a time again.

Monday, 20 September 2004 - 1:52 PM CDT

Name: Bubba

Today's my birthday. So those of you that drink, have one for me because I will probably not have a chance to. If I did, it would probably be a white russian in honor of The Dude, and because they taste so good. To everybody here(including the admin. staff and Rance) I'm sending an imaginary piece of cake your way.

Lot's of 26th birthday love,
Bubba

Monday, 20 September 2004 - 2:25 PM CDT

Name: Nicole

Thank you, RDD.

I was hoping to give the writers after me an array of things they could work with. Looking forward to your storytelling guys and gals. Take care.

Monday, 20 September 2004 - 2:58 PM CDT

Name: feenxc

awright! a mystery! where has stan (bingo) gone? a story line within a story line...oh, the possibilities! great job!

fly, you think you're feet are cold, i'm way down on the list and already shaking in my boots.

do we have an agent yet?

kisshugs

feenxc

Monday, 20 September 2004 - 3:46 PM CDT

Name: JCanuck

Nicole I would so like to thank you for not being Bingo. Annie is a brave woman ;)

Monday, 20 September 2004 - 4:35 PM CDT

Name: princessr9

Happy Birthday Bubba! I'll toast you with my diet pepsi. Thanks for the cake.

Monday, 20 September 2004 - 4:47 PM CDT

Name: Annie
Home Page: http://www.montannie.blogspot.com

Nice job Nicole. Can't wait for Africanuck's continuation. If anyone is looking for me, I will be down on my knees begging Bingo's forgiveness for "Stanagate".

Also, as per the request of Rance:

"Link me baby one more time."


Monday, 20 September 2004 - 4:56 PM CDT

Name: Mia Toretto

Rubber Duckie,

I'd like to pass on my turn.

Thanks for the opportunity. I've just moved into a crazy demanding schedule of sorts.

-Mia

Monday, 20 September 2004 - 5:23 PM CDT

Name: Nicole

Happy Birthday Bubba, may you have many more! I don't drink, haven't drank since Valentine's day seven years ago, but that's a story within itself that isn't necessary to ramble on about...I will have strawberry cheesecake in honor of you on this day...that I will promptly exercise off tomorrow.

Monday, 20 September 2004 - 5:55 PM CDT

Name: Rubber Duckie

Thanks for the heads up Mia!

Monday, 20 September 2004 - 10:15 PM CDT

Name: Bubba

My little sis has a similiar rambly story, sober two and a half years..me, I've never been able to stomach the stuff all that well. I had water (my main drink of choice day in and day out) and just finished making a strawberry cake...which I will promptly work off on the treadmill... very soon.

over and out,
Bubba

Monday, 20 September 2004 - 10:24 PM CDT

Name: Bubba

RDD, what do you think of your story so far? And how did your house and garden work go over the weekend?

Monday, 20 September 2004 - 11:36 PM CDT

Name: El

I love little perfect towns with Sheriffs and Deputies...
and dark, gothic stories...now I have to cackle evilly for a few minutes.

Okay, back.

Why didn't she drink her coffee? I would have finished it before Kaelin said "Well". It's a staple of the soul, coffee.
Great job, Nicole.

El

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 7:44 AM CDT

Name: Mojo

Am enjoying this, but no sidewalks in the country....

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 9:42 AM CDT

Name: t_rexintex

Happy Birthday Bubba!! Here's a piece of birthday advice, which I swear if you follow, will make you wealthy. Its not that easy, but I swear to two things. 1. You can find a way to do it. 2. If you do, you'll thank God that you did.

Save 15% of every dollar you make and put it into a tax deferred retirement account and don't touch it until you retire. You're 26. If you do that for the next 40 years, you'll be a millionaire by the time your 60. You don't have to get fancy with picking stocks. Use your 401K at work if you have one. If you don't, just go down to your local bank and tell them what you want to do and tell them you want to keep it simple.

Its not very exciting now but when you're a rich old man, it will be. ;-)

T Rex

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 11:39 AM CDT

Name: Rubber Duckie

What do I think of the story so far? I honest to goodness think it's fabulous. I love the direction it has taken, the mystery and the humor. I must say that with each new entry I am more and more surprised at what comes out of the minds of the bloggers.

House and garden work? Uggghhhhh. I did get some yardwork done, but then my allergies took over and I was down and out the rest of the weekend. Fall is the WORST for me!

Happy 26th to you Bubba! P.S. Strawberry cake was my favorite and for every birthday my momma always made me a homemade strawberry cake...

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 11:41 AM CDT

Name: Rubber Duckie

The auction was out in the country. The sidewalks were on her drive back into to town...We have sidewalks, the old fashioned kind with gargantuan trees bending over like rainbows of shade.

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 11:51 AM CDT

Name: Nicole

That's funny, I live close to a small town in the country and they have sidewalks...work with me Mojo...

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 12:00 PM CDT

Name: Nicole

Thanks El, I understand your point on the coffee, but Anna was listening to the deputy so intently that she had forgot about it...or perhaps maybe she likes it with cream and sugar and she was to polite to tell him...or maybe she preferred a soda or maybe the deputy was so dang good-looking she couldn't close her mouth good enough to take a drink...or...

Tuesday, 21 September 2004 - 3:20 PM CDT

Name: Rubber Duckie

Dang it! I hate typos!

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